- An increase in overall vehicle length would enable significant volume carrying capacity to be achieved (= longer trucks have more room)
- Larger in size (= bigger)
- In a much shorter time frame (= sooner)
Short and sweet
Some of the writers in our care delight in using long phrases for no clear reason; JD and I take equal delight in cutting them back. Here are some recent examples:
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Well, now that they're not delivering babies anymore, storks had to find SOMETHING to do.
What should the word have been? I'm blanking out.
Stalks, tootsync (at least that's what our writers call them) – the long switches that stick out either side of the steering column to control the indicators and suchlike.
though these aren't my phrases, the reason is generaly to up the word count - Dylan
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