The first par shown needs to be broken up - it took me three reads to get the sense of it. Then there's the apostrophe in Tim Berners Lee's name. And of course the stray 'his' in the third par.
The rest of the article is little better - particularly this short par:
Despite this, people like former US Vice-President Al Gore is an online optimist.
To be honest, I'm not shocked or offended at all - it's just nice to be reminded that nobody's perfect.
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Frankly, I expect better from the Beeb...
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