Showing posts with label active voice. Show all posts
Showing posts with label active voice. Show all posts

Whites searched 'for race balance'. Did they find it?

My first thought on seeing Metro's main front page headline today was: 'So did they find it?'

Metro headline: Whites searched for race balance

As it turns out, 'whites' is the object, not the subject, of the headline (which is written in the passive voice).

(UPDATE 19/07/09: As Garik points out in the comments following this post, 'whites' is actually the subject of this passive sentence.)

The first paragraph of the story clarifies the matter:
Police are searching white people under terror laws simply to provide 'racial balance' to statistics, it was revealed yesterday.


Last year I blogged about police stopping and searching commuters and schoolgirls at my local station...

All bags and coats cannot be reclaimed

Yes, I'm still on holiday. Here's something else I found down the back of my hard drive:

Strangely worded cloakroom sign spotted in Battersea Evolution

So I lose my ticket, and nobody can reclaim any bags and coats until the end of the night? That doesn't seem fair... and what a strange shift from the active to the passive voice in that sentence.

(I actually remember where I took this photo: on a work social in Battersea Evolution late last year. And I didn't lose my ticket.)