Having overturned his false conviction, John Smith is...
Would you make any changes?
I took out 'false' – it's not wrong, but it's pretty self-evident. After all, the conviction has been overturned. I don't think there's anything wrong with:
Having overturned his conviction, John Smith is...
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Yes, I would make changes. I would put him back inside as John Smith is sure to be guilty of something. Why else wouls he call himself John Smith?
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